Thundaboom's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[WGJ4K: Hottest GameChicks]

...wow, really?

Alright. I can understand cliff hangers but that's not how they work.

A cliff hanger is when a certain amount of information is already put in the story and then it is SLOWLY coming to the end with BITS of information on it. You could try making it better by only saying half of "Why he already knows why." The reason I'm telling you this is because it makes it look more like a decent cliff hanger than an unfinished episode.

This thing didn't seem complete. And I also know that you've been lazy because I barely saw any smooth single transition into the ending. Choose your endings better. Maybe Mickey could have just started a story and slowly end it? Normally, I would have expected Mickey to go by his back and then start saying why he knows he was the one who was picked.

The smoothness of the lines was okay but not enough to match your style. I'm not forcing your into another derivative to your style but you must make a point, if you were going to go that far into smoothing the vectors of your linework then you might as well do all.

The story, as I said seemed a little bit off. It's also how you don't really add much to the characters movement, for example, you never see the Boss come out of his chair. CEOs/directors/Bosses usually can get out of their seat and direct the show too. And since this thing is supposed to be for videos then I'm pretty sure the Boss would also have to deal with things outside of what was going on.

You need to have at least 2 people for some variety of voices. I know you can do some, but with others it can get to repetitive and sort of lazy. There are a bunch of voice actors out there on NG that you could use. Or don't. Some of the character really isn't implemented in the voices either. Don't make it sound like the voices are being read straight out of the book. Try to make it so your actually in the situation the character is in.

You have lots of potential. You just need to know how to implement your script correctly.

Or maybe actually have script for something.

[Yotam & Fantasia 01]

sorry honey

i'd give you a TEN but you just offended every big boobed hot bitch in the world who use contacts.

is fantasia an actual girl name?

[No More Tricks]

Kinda short.

I mean, the plot was okay and sort of funny. But I seemed to expect more. LIke, what do some of the monsters want to do? What does he have to say about it?

This really looks unfinished.

[Jack Matthews]

Oh my.

omg this is a game why cant i have sex with the wife??

Oney responds:

shes dead :(

[WGJ4K: Mickey's Rebuttal]

your pants

take them off

[Hamburger Moon]

rofl

the theme music added to the greatness ;)

[Newton Trip]

This is fantastic.

The line art was smooth and FBF was really done well, and I loved the scientific symbolism in there. Keep em coming!

[The gayest piece of shit]

Horrible

I think the animation couldn't have been worse even if it wasn't so fast paced. There was no joke and the coloring was mediocre. Try adding some good backgrounds are not as horrible, or to replace any backgrounds at all.

Lip synching wasn't good at all, using symbols and repeating what the voice says is not the way to go.

Overall: 1/10 - 0/5