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[Gamer Tonight Indie Dev]

Not as good as you said it was.

First of all, the voice acting = terrible. If you really wanted to represent someone in the news, you really shouldn't try getting someone with a croaked voice to do it. It really ruins that 'news' mood.

The plot was not understandable at all. Not only that it was short, but it was more "Badly Scripted" than "random". If you really wanted him to have a future-meets-present situation, you could have had the lights dimmed or something that shows that he's have a magical moment or some kind of important face to face moment. Then it wouldn't be all "WTF" when that portal just re appears with his future self.

Now, for the part when the future self speaks to the indie developer, you should try making it more clear when he's going to sell out to the market. Adding a random jet pack to the plot of the story and then quickly disappearing can be very confusing to some of the viewers, try to make your point with what he's saying instead of him rushing through it.

Animation was very rusty besides the animation of the U.S. dollar coming out of the indie developer's future self. Try something like easing or making the movement the head more real instead of it being all stiff. The linework was mild, you could try smoothing out those animation jaggys to make it look better.

Script: 0/10
Voice Acting:010
Animation:1/10
Lineart:2/10

RubberNinja responds:

Cheers for the review bro!!

[Hola_Pescado!]

Best flash of 2010.

I sincerely loved this animation, even though it had a hint of spam, you've outdone yourself this time lepy. Even though this took 4 months or more, I actually like the finished product.

What I liked the most about it was the frame by frame. You're the only person I know that manages to animate by 2's and still make it look good and eased.

The audio was a tad annoying but I get the theme.

Cons: Ryan Queen's (Mr.Fizzy) voice. He somehow ruined the whole thing for me.

Lepy responds:

Thanks, man.

I think I'm gonna cry joy tears c;

[Oney's Birffday Bash]

Sex at it's fullest capacity.

Loved the whole way the collab was made. Chris O Neill will love this.

I really loved hans 's btw

psychicpebbles responds:

Hans is sexy as FUCK.

[He stole my Lollipop!]

this is classic comedy

the background music made it so amazing

Merol responds:

THANK YOU!!
Evil-Iron picked it!

[juicy...]

That was sexx-amazing.

The body movement and fbf was great. My only complaint is the audio.

coughing-dog responds:

ripped from youtube :P

tried to get it straight from the movie but premiere was shitting me

[Leo & Satan III]

It was worth every millisecond.

You really outdid yourself this time chrissy boy, I loved the shading and filters used correctly for this kind of story.

The plot was amazing-and the fact that you include a Ouija board? That was perfect. :)

[lazymuffin draft collab]

lolno

its k

turtleco responds:

ya rly

[Break Down]

Overall, not so good quality.

The linework isn't so smooth, usually try to zoom in 200% when drawing the lines.

The background is really pixely (try using the flash preferences to make the smoothing options on the image better). Audio wise the quality was horrible. And it's really a bad idea to make the static sound happen on the main frame.

Try improving, your getting better.

[Twilloween]

Haha, very good.

The shadows were very good and the anatomy was great. My only complaint was how stiff some of the frame by frame was.

Very good job and now I will cry in the corner.

[Don't Miss Her Wedding]

Your great, Jackbliss.

You really do know how to get to our feelings. Your animation is great and so is the lesson you shall teach us for every short you make.

SO YEAH 10/10 5/5