Thundaboom's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Zanta Claws III]

Way to go, Edward.

I missed my daily cup o tea because of this.

eddsworld responds:

My most insincerest apologies, Justin.

[Gamer Tonight Indie Dev]

Not as good as you said it was.

First of all, the voice acting = terrible. If you really wanted to represent someone in the news, you really shouldn't try getting someone with a croaked voice to do it. It really ruins that 'news' mood.

The plot was not understandable at all. Not only that it was short, but it was more "Badly Scripted" than "random". If you really wanted him to have a future-meets-present situation, you could have had the lights dimmed or something that shows that he's have a magical moment or some kind of important face to face moment. Then it wouldn't be all "WTF" when that portal just re appears with his future self.

Now, for the part when the future self speaks to the indie developer, you should try making it more clear when he's going to sell out to the market. Adding a random jet pack to the plot of the story and then quickly disappearing can be very confusing to some of the viewers, try to make your point with what he's saying instead of him rushing through it.

Animation was very rusty besides the animation of the U.S. dollar coming out of the indie developer's future self. Try something like easing or making the movement the head more real instead of it being all stiff. The linework was mild, you could try smoothing out those animation jaggys to make it look better.

Script: 0/10
Voice Acting:010
Animation:1/10
Lineart:2/10

RubberNinja responds:

Cheers for the review bro!!

[Oney's Birffday Bash]

Sex at it's fullest capacity.

Loved the whole way the collab was made. Chris O Neill will love this.

I really loved hans 's btw

psychicpebbles responds:

Hans is sexy as FUCK.

[He stole my Lollipop!]

this is classic comedy

the background music made it so amazing

Merol responds:

THANK YOU!!
Evil-Iron picked it!

[juicy...]

That was sexx-amazing.

The body movement and fbf was great. My only complaint is the audio.

coughing-dog responds:

ripped from youtube :P

tried to get it straight from the movie but premiere was shitting me

[lazymuffin draft collab]

lolno

its k

turtleco responds:

ya rly

[Bacon Bacon Bacon]

bakun

COOL STORY BRO

SirReginald responds:

yes

[Jack Matthews]

Oh my.

omg this is a game why cant i have sex with the wife??

Oney responds:

shes dead :(