This has a very nice touch of the abnormal.
The use of your voice made sound effects and the other quiet, simple ones add up to a great visual composition.
The way you animated it clearly is great, with you being the only person I know that can use the pencil tool correctly, and being able to draw up a good anatomy. The visual creepiness is amazing as well.
The moon face, however, was more funny than scary. But it was a great thing to put there to add up as a "WTF" moment.
I can't really say anything bad about this, the movement one time and the structure of the story was acceptable. Good job.